Haiga, Haiku & Stories Of Measuring Distance ~ 5-8-2020
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a child’s laugh
through an open window
lockdown
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two myna birds
screaming crow style fierce
the cat slinks away
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See the first pages in my Book of Haiga:
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a child’s laugh
through an open window
lockdown
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two myna birds
screaming crow style fierce
the cat slinks away
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I like the sequence of the haiga and then the two haiku. The child’s laughter heard through an open window really sums up this time of distancing.
aloha Suzanne. i’ve found i like these loose groupings of haiku with haiga as well. yes, it’s surprising how such a simple thing can encompass the state of our current world. thank you for letting me know how this haiku worked for you. be safe. be well. write on. aloha rick.
The form works well for you.
🙂 thank you.
Funny, I did a lockdown post today as well, my first. I like yours.
janet
aloha Janet. thank you. i’ve found i’ve been writing pandemic related material more often than i’d thought. unfortunately it is very present in our daily lives, even when we are in areas that have low case counts. hopefully we can continue to keep it that way and other areas will get better. stay safe. have fun and write on too. we all need little breaks from the seriousness of this time occasionally. aloha rick.