Haiga, Haiku & Haibun: Boxed Autumn Fall
brown leaves
on my bedroom stand
autumn
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10-8-2017 #3
Autumn Concert
first fall. of autumn leaves. shush. shush. rhythmically. beneath a mango tree. the neighbor raking. against dove chortle. and wind susurration. rising. and lowering. softly. through branches. still holding leaves. crimson. flashing. in my thought. red handle. scarlet leaves. with each shush. shush. i sit. eyes closed. yellowed. in broken sunlight. beneath the avocado tree. listening. to the concert continuum. mingling. natural. and human made. sound.
approaching
an autumn yard nap
earlier songs
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Done, Rick. I’ll check that post that you let go, and revise accordingly. Again, my apologies!
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #4: Dan Daddario’s latest #haiga, haiku and #haibun!
aloha Frank. thank you. i enjoy your blog a lot. i know it’s a lot to keep up. i hope it’s okay, to make a correction in the hashtag #4 rather than “Dan” when you have time change it to “Rick”. if you’re like me, i keep things i repeat where i can just copy it. i know the first one was “Dan” and i let it go. that’s okay. just for future hashtags is fine. thank you. aloha rick.
Absolutely, Rick, and my sincere apologies! I’ll change it ASAP! Thanks for letting me know, and I hope you keep enjoying The Haikai!
I fixed that first post as well, Rick! Thanks for letting me know! 😀
I like everything you have done here Rick and you have written something here that is both short story and poetry along with your Haiku and Haiga. Aloha!
aloha and thank you Renee. i’m having fun on multiple fronts—including new apps i’ve discovered as a result of 30 Days of Haiga. fun on. aloha r.