The Rainy Season ~ for Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge #003, with Buson

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the rainy season

a paper lantern in hand

I walk along the verandah          Buson

 

beneath the hidden moon

the sound of crickets                 Daddario

 

Tan Renga—a two link chain

First three line link—Buson

Second two line link—Rick Daddario

After working the image out this way I am now considering an alternate version in my two lines by adding the word “still” before the last line so it would read like this:

 

the rainy season

a paper lantern in hand

I walk along the verandah          Buson

 

beneath the hidden moon

still the sound of crickets            Daddario

 

It’s a minor change but I like the way it feels over all.

Digital Drawing and Painting

My response to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge #003, with Buson ~ June 2013 

The informative challenge and responses to this challenge can be found on the Carpe Diem Blog.

You are invited to respond as well.

Have fun. Explore haiku. Aloha—Rick

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